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semmickphoto


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Post Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 4:58 pm     Reply with quote

Is this one sharp? Tack sharp? Acceptable?


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tverkhovynets


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Post Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 5:10 pm     Reply with quote

talking about sharpness - yes

Taras
rinder99


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Post Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 5:24 pm     Reply with quote

The very first thing I would suggest is using manual focus for any tabletop shot.And if you don't have enough light which you don't with long shutter spds, AF will not be your friend. I very seldom use AF unless it's bird in flight. AF on slow glass { kit glass] is gonna come back and bite you 90% of the time. It just doesn't have the light gathering ability to work and lock on.Unfortunitely I can't be with you but I gaurantee Myself Dave,jeff and the other guys can spot your issue in 30 seconds just by watching you. There hasen't been one workshop I've ever done or a one on one student That didn't have a focus issue. Theres many little things that can cause this and I firmly believe based on experience that not having a complete understanding of the principals of DOF and how it relates to distance from subject and focal Length used is the curse. I see some folks say they use a tripod only to find out it's a toy tripod with a bad head on it. and at the shutter spds your using is gonna come back and bite ya.

don't do what so many do and blame the equipment and buy more and have the same problem. Find the missing link in what you are doing and I'll bet it's mostly light because light is all we have a photographers and the king. Wish I was there. But im currently sitting on a island now out in the pacific ocean shooting architecture , Lava tubes and volcanoes.
semmickphoto


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Post Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 5:35 pm     Reply with quote

rinder99 wrote:

don't do what so many do and blame the equipment and buy more and have the same problem. Find the missing link in what you are doing and I'll bet it's mostly light because light is all we have a photographers and the king. Wish I was there. But im currently sitting on a island now out in the pacific ocean shooting architecture , Lava tubes and volcanoes.


Hahaha, rub it in. That sounds like an amazing photoshoot. Cant believe you find the time to reply here. Thanks a lot tho. Ow, I am not blaming the equipment, I just want to figure out what I do wrong. But I will keep trying. I am going to redo the photo on saturday. First thing I am going to do is calibrate my diopter.

Thanks and enjoy your time on the island !! Whoohoo
semmickphoto


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Post Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 7:52 pm     Reply with quote

So I started from scratch,

is this acceptable



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geoffwnz


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Post Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 8:48 pm     Reply with quote

As a newbie on here myself, I've been following this part of the forum quite a bit lately to try to figure out what I need to do to get shots I can submit here, let along to SS itself.
So I'm gonna guess uneven light levels, being that it's too dark on the lower right side.
Open to correction by the pros obviously.

Also, I'm intrigued to know how you get the peel to stay up like that. I'm sure it's a simple enough trick. If you know how.
ruxpriencdiam


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Post Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:04 pm     Reply with quote

Still needs more light and your shutter speed is 1.3 seconds which is too slow.


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semmickphoto


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Post Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 4:03 am     Reply with quote

Reshoooooooooot !!! Hahaha.

This is how gents:



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pharm


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Post Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 9:28 am     Reply with quote

One thing I'd like to recommend. I don't know if you've heard us say "watch the details" or not but that can be very important. Assuming that all else was good with this photo, remember that in most cases, stock photos should represent the "ideal" object or situation, not necessarily what it really looks like. An "ideal" orange would have no defects whatsoever and the cut edges would be smooth and perfect not jagged. On your image, I'd also make sure to smooth the circled areas out. (Yes, I missed a couple of areas, too.)


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semmickphoto


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Post Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 11:48 am     Reply with quote

Thanks
jeffbanke


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Post Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 3:26 pm     Reply with quote

geoffwnz wrote:
As a newbie on here myself, I've been following this part of the forum quite a bit lately to try to figure out what I need to do to get shots I can submit here, let along to SS itself.
So I'm gonna guess uneven light levels, being that it's too dark on the lower right side.
Open to correction by the pros obviously.

Also, I'm intrigued to know how you get the peel to stay up like that. I'm sure it's a simple enough trick. If you know how.


Alternative is attach fishing line to the top, less work!
Oop's gave away another secret :-)

BTW Geoff, where are you in NZ, I'll be down there for a month for the roar, from mid April to mid May.
geoffwnz


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Post Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 3:48 pm     Reply with quote

jeffbanke wrote:
geoffwnz wrote:
As a newbie on here myself, I've been following this part of the forum quite a bit lately to try to figure out what I need to do to get shots I can submit here, let along to SS itself.
So I'm gonna guess uneven light levels, being that it's too dark on the lower right side.
Open to correction by the pros obviously.

Also, I'm intrigued to know how you get the peel to stay up like that. I'm sure it's a simple enough trick. If you know how.


Alternative is attach fishing line to the top, less work!
Oop's gave away another secret :-)

BTW Geoff, where are you in NZ, I'll be down there for a month for the roar, from mid April to mid May.

I was thinking fishing line.

In the Wellington region. The roar is what? I recall seeing something somewhere about it.
Actually, pm me about it otherwise we'll end up way off topic.
semmickphoto


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Post Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2012 8:39 am     Reply with quote

Reshoot, seems to be sharp now. I am just bummed out that although shooting at f/8 there is shallow DOF. Is this acceptable?


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semmickphoto


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Post Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 1:21 pm     Reply with quote

Would that shallow DOF be a problem? And how can I avoid that? f/11?
jeffbanke


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Post Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 1:28 pm     Reply with quote

Personally I think your DOF is adequate, lighting is good, no intense shadows, they are filled nicely, so you may have it here ;-)
 
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