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ovisovata83


Joined: 11 Feb 2011
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Post Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 2:09 pm     Reply with quote

Forest spring


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jeffbanke


Joined: 18 Dec 2005
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Post Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 2:09 pm     Reply with quote

I didn't check on the disks, but the fewer the better, gives you more opportunity for sales:-)

On the stream, it too needs to lead somewhere, be nice if there was a lake there at the end or something

Forest spring is nice

BTW it does not look like your 100% crops are in fact 100% they look smaller
ovisovata83


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Post Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 2:12 pm     Reply with quote

Feet in the sand


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ovisovata83


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Post Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 2:13 pm     Reply with quote

Concept


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ovisovata83


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Post Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 2:15 pm     Reply with quote

These are the uploads at this time... Please critique

Thanks
ruxpriencdiam


Joined: 07 May 2009
Posts: 26257
Location: Third Stone from the Sun

Post Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 2:20 pm     Reply with quote

Forget the feet in the sand.

The Euro i believe may be a copyright issue and your skin reflection in the wrench wont cut it.
pharm


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Post Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 4:06 pm     Reply with quote

Also, none of your crops are 100%. Without 100% crops, it's difficult to give you a complete evaluation. See this thread for an explanation:

http://submit.shutterstock.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=120676&sid=661305897a8122abeb4a647495ede671

Your crops are covering about a third of the entire image. The shot of the piano, for example...the original is 4288 x 2848 pixels. A 100% crop (500 x 500 pixels) should cover the area seen outlined in yellow below:



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pharm


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Post Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 4:24 pm     Reply with quote

One of the most common mistakes people make when trying to do a 100% crop is that they open the image at 100%, crop out a random area, THEN resize the crop so the longest side is 500 pixels. All is well until they get to the resizing part. If you resize the crop, it's no longer a 100% crop!

This is probably the easiest way:

-Open your image (the original one, not the resized one).

-Create a new image/file that's 500 x 500 pixels.

-Copy the original image (Select all/copy)

-Go to the new image/file you just created and paste (Ctrl-V)

-Move the image around until the part you want is visible.

-Flatten the image

-Save it with a NEW name (or you might overwrite the original)

Your new file will be a 100% crop that's 500 x 500 pixels.
ovisovata83


Joined: 11 Feb 2011
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Post Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 3:41 am     Reply with quote

pharm wrote:
One of the most common mistakes people make when trying to do a 100% crop is that they open the image at 100%, crop out a random area, THEN resize the crop so the longest side is 500 pixels. All is well until they get to the resizing part. If you resize the crop, it's no longer a 100% crop!

This is probably the easiest way:

-Open your image (the original one, not the resized one).

-Create a new image/file that's 500 x 500 pixels.

-Copy the original image (Select all/copy)

-Go to the new image/file you just created and paste (Ctrl-V)

-Move the image around until the part you want is visible.

-Flatten the image

-Save it with a NEW name (or you might overwrite the original)

Your new file will be a 100% crop that's 500 x 500 pixels.


Thank you,

I was doing it the wrong way.

So, in conclusion I still have some work to do but it's always a pleasure.
ovisovata83


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Post Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 12:41 pm     Reply with quote

Please critique these uploads...
Is there any chance in them being Shutterstock-worthy? :)

Thanks in advance,
Ovi



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ovisovata83


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Post Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 12:41 pm     Reply with quote

Mountain lake


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ovisovata83


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Post Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 12:43 pm     Reply with quote

Heavy clouds


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ruxpriencdiam


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Post Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 12:49 pm     Reply with quote

The boat is OOF with noise in it.

The Alps are OOF with blown highlights, wrong WB/lighting,and noise in the water.

Heavy clouds are to forget B&W and it will get hit with lighting, noise and OOF.
jeffbanke


Joined: 18 Dec 2005
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Post Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 12:50 pm     Reply with quote

All three look noisy, I didn't check the ISO, but you have a noise problem which may due to High ISO.

The mountain lake has color noise which makes purple in the water.

The sunset is noisy in the sky which is the highest level of light and where there should be no noise

Forget the BW's all together
ovisovata83


Joined: 11 Feb 2011
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Post Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 12:56 pm     Reply with quote

Thanks,

Got the idea and appreciate your input.
Just trying to understand the "magic formula" and polish my skills.
 
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