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luizeduardo
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 4:46 pm
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I hate the smell of cigars, so this one was hard to compose :-)
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triceratops
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 5:06 pm
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Looks sharp enough. General rule of thumb is sharp focus front to back, but I think this image may be the exception to the rule ... unless you can get all of the ashtray and cigarette in focus.
However, this is not an isolation. The shadow makes it an on-white image. To be a true isolation, there should be no shadow.
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rinder99
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 5:50 pm
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it's a cigarette.
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pharm
Joined: 09 Jul 2006
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Location: Never quite sure
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 7:43 pm
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It IS sharp but it's overexposed with too many blown highlights.
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rinder99
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 8:01 pm
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| pharm wrote: | | It IS sharp but it's overexposed with too many blown highlights. |
Agree.
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greenfield54
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Location: Philippines
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 8:37 pm
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Perhaps it would look better on black or on a natural setting.
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luizeduardo
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 9:25 pm
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Better? I have applied some recovery.
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rinder99
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 10:06 pm
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| greenfield54 wrote: | | Perhaps it would look better on black or on a natural setting. |
Disagree.
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rinder99
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 10:06 pm
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Good for first 10 I think.
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candystripe
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 10:33 pm
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| rinder99 wrote: | | it's a cigarette. |
+1
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luizeduardo
Joined: 12 Sep 2010
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Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2012 8:35 am
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| candystripe wrote: | | rinder99 wrote: | | it's a cigarette. |
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My mistake. The confusion was caused due to the proximity of the portuguese word "Cigarro" with english cigar. Cigar in portuguese is "Charuto" (now I know).
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semmickphoto
Joined: 12 Feb 2012
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Location: Stuck between a shutter and a hard place
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Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2012 10:23 am
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| luizeduardo wrote: | | candystripe wrote: | | rinder99 wrote: | | it's a cigarette. |
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My mistake. The confusion was caused due to the proximity of the portuguese word "Cigarro" with english cigar. Cigar in portuguese is "Charuto" (now I know). |
Dont worry, English is not your first language so mistakes are allowed :-). However, its good to know when putting in the keywords, to call it cigarettes ;-)
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marcusvdt
Joined: 12 Feb 2009
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 9:11 am
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Yeah baby, it is sharp.
Lighting is ok on the 2nd version. Congrats, you are getting to the point.
PS. I did not check WB nor blown highlights on the 2nd version, but it looks ok...
Save it for the 1st 10.
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rinder99
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 9:41 am
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I think your good to go for first 10. But if it were mine I would isolate it. To me it looks cleaner and more useable. your call.
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cpaulfell
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 10:32 am
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There is no smoke?
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