Welcome, Anonymous (Profile, Private Messages)
Having trouble signing into the forums? Please [ logout ] and log back in.
 Log inLog in 
SEARCH:     » Advanced Search

Shutterstock Photographer Forum Forum Index : Critique / Tips / Tricks :
First 10 - critique please
Page Previous  1, 2
 
Post new topic    Reply to topic
Author Message
ronninron


Joined: 03 Oct 2011
Posts: 12

Post Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 5:36 am     Reply with quote

Thanks for the advices.

How can I improve my focusing technique?

Is this call_center2 better framing and focus?

For example on the call center girl I shoot with: Nikon D90 - Nikkor G 35mm f/1.8 at F 7,1 ISO 200 1/160


Water droplets shoot with: Nikon D90 - Tamron 70-200mm F/2.8 at F 11 145mm ISO 200 1/160

I know that my photos are not perfect but could any of the above pass the first 10 test?



call_center2.jpg
 Description:
call center 2
 Filesize:  112.09 KB
 Viewed:  1236 Time(s)

call_center2.jpg



call_center2_crop.jpg
 Description:
call center 2 crop
 Filesize:  194.58 KB
 Viewed:  1236 Time(s)

call_center2_crop.jpg


ruxpriencdiam


Joined: 07 May 2009
Posts: 26274
Location: Third Stone from the Sun

Post Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 5:56 am     Reply with quote

Focus looks better on this one.
hhltdave5


Joined: 20 Jun 2006
Posts: 24088
Location: Our Stock, Food & Portrait photography books at www.rindersmithphotography.com

Post Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 6:07 am     Reply with quote

Looks a touch over exposed. Notice how the colors seem a bit washed out? Over exposure will do that.
 
Display posts from previous:   
Post new topic   Reply to topic Page 2 of 2 All times are GMT - 5 Hours
Page Previous  1, 2

 


Shutterstock Forum for Contributors