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mdegt


Joined: 08 May 2011
Posts: 30

Post Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 10:42 pm     Reply with quote

Greetings everyone,

Here's part of my first ten, please provide your honest feedback.



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ruxpriencdiam


Joined: 07 May 2009
Posts: 26185
Location: Third Stone from the Sun

Post Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 11:02 pm     Reply with quote

OOF and composition.
rinder99


Joined: 12 Jul 2005
Posts: 39145
Location: Contact www.rinderart.com/Books and Workshops www.rindersmithphotography.com Youtube/rinder

Post Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 11:31 pm     Reply with quote

C-mon Man. Just start one post then answer yourself with another pic. your allowed 3 pics per post. Geeeeeez.
kellythorson


Joined: 22 Sep 2011
Posts: 694
Location: Canada

Post Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 12:43 am     Reply with quote

Your crop is showing a bit of noise and is somewhat soft. Are you using a tripod?
It is important to get your focus and exposure down for stock. Any attempts to up the exposure or sharpen to any great degree will introduce noise.
Your model is adorable BTW! I find the barrette at the outside corner a bit distracting and would clone it out if you re shoot or for future reference.
Your pictures need some work, but for the most part I don't think you are all that far off. Work on your focus for starters and your exposure.
hhltdave5


Joined: 20 Jun 2006
Posts: 24059
Location: Our Stock, Food & Portrait photography books at www.rindersmithphotography.com

Post Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 4:41 am     Reply with quote

On a positive note I kind of like the shot with the leaves. Nice autumn feeling to it. Need to see a crop for focus and noise but something like that could work.
mdegt


Joined: 08 May 2011
Posts: 30

Post Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 8:26 pm     Reply with quote

Hi guys, thank you all for the critique, and my apologies for the posting 10 pictures in 8 threads - won't happen again.

Here's two 100% crops of leaves picture.



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