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Please critique my candidates for the first ten (batch 7)
Joined: 08 May 2011
Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 10:53 pm
Here's part of my first ten, please provide your honest feedback.
DEGT0831 - Version 2.jpg
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Joined: 07 May 2009
Location: Third Stone from the Sun
Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 11:18 pm
OOF and may have some copyrights with shoes, bike or helmet?
Also why have her looking backwards at the camera? You need to shoot it from the front as she comes towards you.
Joined: 22 Sep 2011
Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 1:02 am
I actually like her looking back, it's as if she is seeking approval or else showing pride. Unfortunately it is soft or out of focus.
Joined: 20 Jun 2006
Location: Our Stock, Food & Portrait photography books at www.rindersmithphotography.com
Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 4:38 am
A touch under exposed as well. You want to make sure that you get the face properly lit. Between the helmet and her coat the face is hidden a bit. A fill flash would help out here.
I kind of like the looking back aspect of it but would also shoot one with her looking forward as well.
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