Welcome, Anonymous (Profile, Private Messages)
Having trouble signing into the forums? Please [ logout ] and log back in.  Log inLog in 
SEARCH:     » Advanced Search

Shutterstock Photographer Forum Forum Index : Critique / Tips / Tricks :
Critique please
 
Post new topic    Reply to topic
Author Message
chanevy


Joined: 13 Oct 2011
Posts: 87
Post Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 9:13 am     Reply with quote

Please check this one. I'm eligible to resubmit again, but don't really see the point until I have 10 good candidates. I appreciate everyone's help so far.

2012_03_31_1616 crop.jpg
 Description:
 Filesize:  61.47 KB
 Viewed:  1482 Time(s)

2012_03_31_1616 crop.jpg
2012_03_31_1616 resize.jpg
 Description:
 Filesize:  76.52 KB
 Viewed:  1482 Time(s)

2012_03_31_1616 resize.jpg
rinder99


Joined: 12 Jul 2005
Posts: 39620
Location: Contact www.rinderart.com/Books and Workshops www.rindersmithphotography.com Youtube/rinder
Post Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 9:36 am     Reply with quote

Not sharp enough and snapshot composition.
chanevy


Joined: 13 Oct 2011
Posts: 87
Post Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 9:58 am     Reply with quote

I was hoping the focus was getting better. Appreciate your honest feedback.
digigandalf


Joined: 11 Jun 2005
Posts: 5450
Location: Twinsburg, OH
Post Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 10:22 am     Reply with quote

It's not real far off, but not quite there yet (I don't remember how the focus looked in your earlier tries).

Composition suffers from cutting off the back and tail of the bird and shooting down on it instead of on its own level. The messy grass doesn't help things either.
 
Display posts from previous:   
Post new topic   Reply to topic Page 1 of 1 All times are GMT - 5 Hours

 

Contact Us
Terms of Service
Privacy Policy
Tell a Friend!
Submit Referer Program
Shutterbuzz



Shutterstock Forum for Contributors