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ulispace
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2012 7:24 am
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This illustration didn't pass the examination. Reason: «Your image is not in focus or focus is not located where we feel it works best».
I made this picture in 3ds Max and Vue. I think, all objects of the scene are in focus and accurately visible. What may be the problem?
Welcom any critique. Thank you.
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jhuls
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2012 8:08 am
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Once again this is really the wrong forum, try the illustration forum and I think you will get better help.
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semmickphoto
Joined: 12 Feb 2012
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Location: Stuck between a shutter and a hard place
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2012 8:17 am
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I think its a big compliment on itself to have them think its a photo ;-)
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jmci
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2012 9:00 am
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First of all, I really admire anybody who can create illustrations like that - way out of my league! If I might just be extra picky, I wonder about the scale of the white speedboat. Does anyone else think that it looks too big in comparison with the landing quay?
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ulispace
Joined: 12 Apr 2012
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2012 9:34 am
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| semmickphoto wrote: | | I think its a big compliment on itself to have them think its a photo ;-) |
I wrote that this is the illustration, not photo :)
Maybe, another forum.
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ulispace
Joined: 12 Apr 2012
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2012 9:35 am
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| jmci wrote: | | First of all, I really admire anybody who can create illustrations like that - way out of my league! If I might just be extra picky, I wonder about the scale of the white speedboat. Does anyone else think that it looks too big in comparison with the landing quay? |
Thanks. VUE — its the magic program.
Yes, some objects may not be correct proportions, I agree with you.
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rinder99
Joined: 12 Jul 2005
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Location: Contact www.rinderart.com/Books and Workshops www.rindersmithphotography.com Youtube/rinder
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2012 9:50 am
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I think it's kinda cool in a strange way.But I can see why the reviewer might have rejected it. Maybe re-submit with a note explaining what it is?
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semmickphoto
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2012 10:28 am
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| ulispace wrote: | | semmickphoto wrote: | | I think its a big compliment on itself to have them think its a photo ;-) |
I wrote that this is the illustration, not photo :)
Maybe, another forum. |
Yes I know its an illustration, thats why I said its a big compliment on itself that a reviewer thought it was a photo :0)
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iris42
Joined: 04 Feb 2010
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2012 8:25 pm
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Did you check the clip art/illustration box when you submitted it?
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ulispace
Joined: 12 Apr 2012
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Posted: Tue May 15, 2012 3:23 am
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Iris42, yes, I checked this option.
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mattgibson
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 10:40 am
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A tad flat maybe, give it a bit more contrast to enhance impression of focus?
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rinder99
Joined: 12 Jul 2005
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 6:59 pm
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Matt, your images with the book are amazing to say the least.
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gabes1976
Joined: 30 Jan 2011
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2012 8:47 pm
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| rinder99 wrote: | | Matt, your images with the book are amazing to say the least. |
+1
I really like Matt's stuff.
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mattgibson
Joined: 11 Nov 2009
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Location: London
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 7:35 am
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Thank you both very much. Always nice to be acknowledged by your peers. Much appreciated.
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