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semmickphoto

Joined: 12 Feb 2012
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 12:46 am
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Hi all,
I know I am in and I know I critique others, but sometimes I still dont see what the reviewer is seeing. (My acceptance rate has significantly risen for the last several batches tho).
This one was dinged for uneven lighting and LCV - we dont need it now.
I get the LCV, there are many shots of this kind, but I figured since I thought it was good photo I submitted it. I have no issues with it being LCV.
But I dont see the uneven lighting problems. There are small lines of shadows on the right side of the masts, but the photo was taken with the sun in my back, late in the afternoon, I dont see a problem with the lighting other than the shadows, but in this case the shadows give contrast and depth to the masts. Is that the uneven lighting the reviewer is referring to?
Is there no room for shadows at all? I have had 'worse' shots accepted.
Can you please shed some light on this uneven lighting?
Much appreciated.
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blinztree

Joined: 31 May 2010
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 3:05 am
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For a image with open sunny skies like yours, it looks very much over-casted. It should be brighter.
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tverkhovynets

Joined: 12 Jun 2010
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Location: Kiev, Ukraine
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 5:01 am
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| blinztree wrote: | | For a image with open sunny skies like yours, it looks very much over-casted. It should be brighter. |
+1. Low contrast. Always think about what the buyer will see on the thumbnail image.
Taras
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aksshutterstock

Joined: 01 Oct 2009
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 5:12 am
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Yes this should be brighter, stretching of histogram in the right. Uneven lighting I think is the dark patches on the top.
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Mike Price

Joined: 06 Jun 2008
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:53 am
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Agree with others, it is a bit underexposed.
Mike
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jeffbanke

Joined: 18 Dec 2005
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 9:15 am
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Also agree it is a tad flat, however the subject matter is also a bit too small. It would be better with some forground interest.
This may help
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semmickphoto

Joined: 12 Feb 2012
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 9:23 am
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Morning all,
I see it now. Thanks.
@ aksshutterstock your version is really good. Thanks.
@ Mike N, thanks. I kind of wanted to show the whole farm and included the clouds so show the wind. But maybe I have included too much empty blue sky.
Thanks all, for clearing this up.
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robhainer

Joined: 03 May 2010
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Location: Dallas, GA, USA
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 9:25 am
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Agree. The composition bothers me more than the lighting. They lighting could easily be tweaked, so it was just processing. The subjects are just too small to get any sense of them.
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rinder99

Joined: 12 Jul 2005
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 10:53 am
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| robhainer wrote: | | Agree. The composition bothers me more than the lighting. They lighting could easily be tweaked, so it was just processing. The subjects are just too small to get any sense of them. |
Agree.
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semmickphoto

Joined: 12 Feb 2012
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 11:00 am
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I agree too, I can see the composition issue as explained by and to Mike N, but I didnt fully understand the lighting problem.
Maybe I will crop it and resubmit, I also have other photos from that series, I might have some close ups.
Then again, I think they are not better than already out there.
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robhainer

Joined: 03 May 2010
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Location: Dallas, GA, USA
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 1:44 pm
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Doesn't hurt (you) to upload it even if they aren't better. There could be something about your composition that is exactly what a buyer is looking for. Maybe a pano composition or something. Just because Yuri Acurs shot something similar and better doesn't mean I'm not going to upload it! In fact, I'll steal his keywords.
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scruggelgreen

Joined: 09 Mar 2010
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Location: Apple Valley Minnesota
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 7:24 pm
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| robhainer wrote: | | Doesn't hurt (you) to upload it even if they aren't better. There could be something about your composition that is exactly what a buyer is looking for. Maybe a pano composition or something. Just because Yuri Acurs shot something similar and better doesn't mean I'm not going to upload it! In fact, I'll steal his keywords. |
Wait a minute......
Stealing is to remove possession of an object from an individual. Yuri will still have his Keywords after you "Steal" them from him. It would be like someone claiming to steal your car, then you run outside, and guess what, your car is still there! So did they really steal your car? Lol
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semmickphoto

Joined: 12 Feb 2012
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Location: Stuck between a shutter and a hard place
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 8:52 pm
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| robhainer wrote: | | Doesn't hurt (you) to upload it even if they aren't better. There could be something about your composition that is exactly what a buyer is looking for. Maybe a pano composition or something. Just because Yuri Acurs shot something similar and better doesn't mean I'm not going to upload it! In fact, I'll steal his keywords. |
Makes sense. I will be copying his keywords then ;-)
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blinztree

Joined: 31 May 2010
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 11:02 pm
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Maybe it's time to recalibrate your monitor
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semmickphoto

Joined: 12 Feb 2012
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 11:08 pm
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| blinztree wrote: | | Maybe it's time to recalibrate your monitor |
Why? My monitor shows exactly what it is, too dark. I just made a judgement error.
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