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vecina
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 11:10 pm
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I wan´t to know opinions about this type of image. I want to become a submiter.
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ruxpriencdiam
Joined: 07 May 2009
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Location: Third Stone from the Sun
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Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 11:33 pm
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It is OOF the lighting is harsh and uneven, he is walking out of frame, copyright on jacket and you will need a model release.
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rinder99
Joined: 12 Jul 2005
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Location: Contact www.rinderart.com/Books and Workshops www.rindersmithphotography.com Youtube/rinder
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Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 12:43 am
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That was pretty short and sweet but I agree. Although The shadow doesn't bother me.
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kenny123
Joined: 13 Aug 2005
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Location: Masterton,Wairarapa, New Zealand
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Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 2:20 am
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Lighting is harsh, but not uneven-in black and white composition is reminiscent of Cartier-Bresson. More of a street shot than Stock.
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ajancso
Joined: 18 May 2009
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Location: Right Behind You
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Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 7:59 am
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I like it. The fact he is walking out of the frame does not bother me. Actually, its one of those time where breaking the rule is adding something.
As Kenny said, clearly not for stock.
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hhltdave5
Joined: 20 Jun 2006
Posts: 24308
Location: Our Stock, Food & Portrait photography books at www.rindersmithphotography.com
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Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 8:04 am
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I don't mind the harsh shadows because they go well with the hard color palette. I do agree about the commercial value and the release point.
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jeffbanke
Joined: 18 Dec 2005
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Location: www.xlr8photo.com, The real California
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Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 10:08 am
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CV issues aside I think it was a timing issue, this would have been better
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mikenorton
Joined: 22 Aug 2005
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Location: Guide Book http://www.lulu.com/shop/mike-norton/nortons-notes/paperback/product-5079819.html
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Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 11:43 pm
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Is that a window or a painting of a window?
I like the picture. Did you do other shots of the boy doing something other than walking by, like running, riding a bicycle, or kicking a soccer ball?
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vecina
Joined: 15 Mar 2012
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 1:04 pm
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Coul´d you please explain me. Why do you say the boy is walking out of the frame?
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hhltdave5
Joined: 20 Jun 2006
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Location: Our Stock, Food & Portrait photography books at www.rindersmithphotography.com
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 1:10 pm
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| vecina wrote: | Coul´d you please explain me. Why do you say the boy is walking out of the frame?
| ruxpriencdiam wrote: | | It is OOF the lighting is harsh and uneven, he is walking out of frame, copyright on jacket and you will need a model release. |
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When someone is looking into or moving toward the short side of the image (less negative space) that is going out of the frame. In other words they are getting close to the edge of the image.
Walking or looking into the frame is just the opposite. It means they are looking or moving toward the part of the frame that has more negative space or room. Doing it this way gives the image more balance.
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kellythorson
Joined: 22 Sep 2011
Posts: 743
Location: Canada
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 1:53 pm
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I like it, I'd like to see more of your pictures to see if this is indicative of your style. While normally not recommended, I like the boy walking out of the picture in this case. It provokes thought. Maybe not the best for stock - but then it seems no one really knows what will take off. It would make a great book cover.
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nadger
Joined: 13 Sep 2009
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Location: God only knows
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 2:12 pm
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How about this - gives it a bit more CV?
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nadger
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 2:28 pm
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Or even this? HaHa....
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