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pharm


Joined: 09 Jul 2006
Posts: 9406
Location: Never quite sure

Post Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:48 pm     Reply with quote

This is one of my best and I think it's really cool so I hope you guys think it's really cool too and i'd like for you to critique it for me if you don't mind and tell me if you think it would sell. I think it could be used by a lot of people for posters or diaper ads or something. Should I submit it? I think that technically it's about perfect and i've amazed myself at the stunning composition.

(Sorry, folks. The Critique forum seemed a bit barren tonight so I thought I'd give you something to play with). :)



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aynia


Joined: 18 Feb 2009
Posts: 2435
Location: The Land of the Vikings

Post Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:16 am     Reply with quote

It's great to do something different and not to copy what's been done to death.

The second one is pretty amazing! :-)
fraiseap


Joined: 10 Oct 2008
Posts: 1530
Location: Birmingham UK and www.adamfraise.com

Post Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 1:48 am     Reply with quote

I think there may be just the faintest touch of noise in the crop. Otherwise a great shot - hope it gets accepted.
jps


Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 12094
Location: Denmark

Post Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 3:56 am     Reply with quote

I love HDR.
supertramp


Joined: 29 May 2005
Posts: 4518
Location: I don't know, I'm guessing. :)

Post Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 4:46 am     Reply with quote

Your finest work to date.
fraiseap


Joined: 10 Oct 2008
Posts: 1530
Location: Birmingham UK and www.adamfraise.com

Post Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 5:28 am     Reply with quote

supertramp wrote:
Your finest work to date.


I disagree, the pink cat was better
digigandalf


Joined: 11 Jun 2005
Posts: 5416
Location: Twinsburg, OH

Post Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 5:57 am     Reply with quote

Perry, the colors are to die for (or is it "from"?). A definite keeper. Definitely too good for SS, though, whose reviewers, I fear, may not have the finely honed tastes to appreciate great works of art

The perspective on the full-sized image is,... ah, certainly unique.
hgwood


Joined: 26 May 2009
Posts: 135

Post Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 6:03 am     Reply with quote

Trademark infringement on that date stamp; prior art by Gregory XIII
fraiseap


Joined: 10 Oct 2008
Posts: 1530
Location: Birmingham UK and www.adamfraise.com

Post Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 6:23 am     Reply with quote

digigandalf wrote:
Perry, the colors are to die for (or is it "from"?).


Yeah, how did you do that. Was it

Image>adjustments>select cr*p>worsen
espencer


Joined: 03 Aug 2008
Posts: 3271
Location: She could be anywhere and might be?

Post Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 6:31 am     Reply with quote

Composition is fantastic...
Everyone should take notes!!!

Betty :0)
themightyshrub


Joined: 21 Jan 2009
Posts: 943
Location: www.heathergreig.co.uk

Post Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 6:47 am     Reply with quote

I think your crop is upside down
hhltdave5


Joined: 20 Jun 2006
Posts: 24090
Location: Our Stock, Food & Portrait photography books at www.rindersmithphotography.com

Post Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:15 am     Reply with quote

You know Perry, there just may be hope for you yet! I think shooting things while off your medication seems to have helped you!
kellyplz


Joined: 09 Mar 2009
Posts: 17521
Location: Manitoulin Island, Canada.

Post Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:16 am     Reply with quote

LOL!
espencer


Joined: 03 Aug 2008
Posts: 3271
Location: She could be anywhere and might be?

Post Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:16 am     Reply with quote

hhltdave5 wrote:
You know Perry, there just may be hope for you yet! I think shooting things while off your medication seems to have helped you!


So that is the reason...
LOL Dave...

Betty :0)
evaners


Joined: 04 Mar 2008
Posts: 6595
Location: NO! We aren't there yet!

Post Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 8:46 am     Reply with quote

Bah! You guys go to easy on Perry just for being an old-timer here. Be honest, I see at least two issues that you would have killed a newbie for:

A. Just below (above?) the time stamp is an orangey speck and a small black thing that runs out of the edge. Ya gotta clean up that kind of stuff in PhotoShop before you post in here.

B. Do I actually have to point this out? I read each post figuring one of you guys would see it and comment. But leave it to the illustrator to notice the crappy antenna sticking out of the roof. C'mon, this is PhotoShop 101 here.
 
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