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Please critique my first ten. Thank you!
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gabri


Joined: 25 Sep 2009
Posts: 12

Post Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:15 am     Reply with quote

These are my first ten pictures to Shutterstock, thank you for the help you give in selection.


Clothes-tie-green-orange copy.jpg
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Orange shirt
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Office windows reflection in 100%
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Office window reflection
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gabri


Joined: 25 Sep 2009
Posts: 12

Post Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:46 am     Reply with quote

Thank you for your help.


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Paper sampler detail in 100%
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Paper sampler detail
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Orange shirt in 100%
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gabri


Joined: 25 Sep 2009
Posts: 12

Post Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:49 am     Reply with quote

Thank you for your critique.


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gabri


Joined: 25 Sep 2009
Posts: 12

Post Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:53 am     Reply with quote

Thanks for critique.


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Cotton yarns in 100%
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gabri


Joined: 25 Sep 2009
Posts: 12

Post Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:06 pm     Reply with quote

Thank you.


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gabri


Joined: 25 Sep 2009
Posts: 12

Post Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:07 pm     Reply with quote

Sorry...


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jeffbanke


Joined: 18 Dec 2005
Posts: 7225
Location: www.xlr8photo.com

Post Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:11 pm     Reply with quote

Gabri,
I think you are leaning towards artzy stuff, which does not correlate to stock very well, or at least some of it doesn't.
The first rules of stock are:
1. It must suport the sales of a product, service or concept. To this end we advise writing down 5 different products or services your images could support and in which way, given that if you can find five, then a buyer might also find one of the five to use your image.
2. Images that can be used in a book because they support a story, a process (animal husbandry, grooming, or gardening, etc) or could be used in calendar like animal images for example.

Unfortunately, I do not see the applications for your images, meaning that I think they have LCV.
jeffbanke


Joined: 18 Dec 2005
Posts: 7225
Location: www.xlr8photo.com

Post Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:14 pm     Reply with quote

The food image is much closer, although I had difficulty underestanding exactly what it was until reading your explanation. Try to reshoot this one rotate the bacon so that one can see more of it. and be careful to make sure that the very front of the image is in focus.
gabri


Joined: 25 Sep 2009
Posts: 12

Post Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:15 pm     Reply with quote

Thank you for critique!


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jeffbanke


Joined: 18 Dec 2005
Posts: 7225
Location: www.xlr8photo.com

Post Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:27 pm     Reply with quote

The grass might make it as a background, although I would suggest NOT using it in your first 10
gabri


Joined: 25 Sep 2009
Posts: 12

Post Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:27 pm     Reply with quote

Thank you for your critique!


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gabri


Joined: 25 Sep 2009
Posts: 12

Post Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:33 pm     Reply with quote

Thank you!


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hhltdave5


Joined: 20 Jun 2006
Posts: 10893
Location: Our stock and food photography books at www.rindersmithphotography.com

Post Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:34 pm     Reply with quote

I can see uses for the shirt and tie image and the threads. The colors in the thread image are a bit dull so you should work on making them pop more.

I agree with Jeff on the bacon image although to me it almost looks like pork belly. It seems to be cut differently than a regular slab bacon is cut.

Food images can be difficult to do if they are not prepared properly. A bacon image should have more crispness to it and there seems to be too much for the image you presented. To me it looks like you were trying to do a crostini or bruschetta. If this is the case then it would have been better to do the bacon on the bread first which should be toasted and then the scallions scattered over the bacon. I would have also cut the scallions thinner so they don't have a bulky look to them.

There is also some black object coming out of the top one and I have so idea what it is. Generally speaking everything in the image should be identifiable. Remember that you know what it is because you put it there but the viewer doesn't.
gabri


Joined: 25 Sep 2009
Posts: 12

Post Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:35 pm     Reply with quote

Thanks!


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gabri


Joined: 25 Sep 2009
Posts: 12

Post Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:42 pm     Reply with quote

the last one for now...


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