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nikoscot
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 8:39 am
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Hi everybody. This is my first photo I send and I would like a critique by you. It's also my first attempt to make a 100% crop. I hope I made it right. Thanks in advance. Niko
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digigandalf

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Location: Twinsburg, OH
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 9:21 am
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A bit underexposed. Flags should be brighter... but, there's probably not much commercial value to torn and tattered flags to begin with.
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nikoscot
Joined: 23 Jul 2009
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 9:38 am
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Another one.
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fraiseap

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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 9:55 am
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There appear to be halos round the wood of "outpost" at 100%, also some suggestion on moire patterns. Did you use any sharpening?
Otherwise, same problem as the first - low commercial value. Think "would an advert want to use this image". Remember, stock is mainly about making images that would sell or promote a product or concept. Apart from that, images that you could imagine on a greetings card or a calendar.
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hhltdave5

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Location: Our Stock, Food & Portrait photography books at www.rindersmithphotography.com
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jeffbanke

Joined: 18 Dec 2005
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Location: www.xlr8photo.com, slipping into darkness
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 2:50 pm
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Needs to look more like this and as was pointed out the sharpening is over done! I you shot RAW you can fix it, if you didn't ditch the image!
With an image like this I would suggest taking it one step further, and mask the sky, raising the level of flag and pole even more.
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nikoscot
Joined: 23 Jul 2009
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 4:28 pm
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Thanks everyone for the tips. I didn't do any sharpening on my photos. Yes, it's RAW format.
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jeffbanke

Joined: 18 Dec 2005
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Location: www.xlr8photo.com, slipping into darkness
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:53 pm
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| nikoscot wrote: | | Thanks everyone for the tips. I didn't do any sharpening on my photos. Yes, it's RAW format. |
Do you have sharpening turned on in the camera?
You may not have done any but the camera could have!
I shoot my cameras with everything turned off, that way I have complete control over sharpening and everything else in Adobe camera RAW!
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triceratops

Joined: 15 Nov 2006
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Location: The other Nevada
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 7:32 pm
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Also, Adobe RAW usually has sharpening set at 25% by default. You need to check to be sure that is turned off.
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antoine2000
Joined: 17 Sep 2009
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Location: London
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 5:42 am
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Actually, how do you turn that off? Recently upgraded to CS4 and noted that they have the 25 sharpness value. Any pointers would be helpful.
Sorry for the slight off topic.
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nikoscot
Joined: 23 Jul 2009
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 11:27 am
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I'll check to see if the camera has such a seting installed. I didn't knew that this is possible.
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jeffbanke

Joined: 18 Dec 2005
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 11:53 am
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I find that Adobe RAW setting of 25 is normally OK, especially since I have the camera sharpening turned off!
For in camera sharpening - Read the manual!
It is on page 57 in the Nikon D70s manual, and listed under optimizing images-image enhancement options!
It is on page 153 of the D300 manual, under Modifying picture controls!
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nikoscot
Joined: 23 Jul 2009
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 3:33 pm
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You are right, Jeffbanke. In the setings in the menu, at the Picture Style, there were a "detail set" and there it was : Sharpness and it was at on level 3 (min 0, max 7). I've got a CANON 450D
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