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shotum
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:39 am
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There you go...
tell me what you think ..
Should I loose the black background on the top of the image or it does not bother ?
what else would you suggest for this picture ?
Might be that the dof is too shallow?
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frankspee
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Location: Amsterdam, Netherlands
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 3:27 am
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I think it is a good application of shallow DoF. Razorsharp where it should be.
As you say yourself; I'd lose the black on top.
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shotum
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 3:33 am
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Here's one more
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shotum
Joined: 04 Nov 2008
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 3:33 am
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| frankspee wrote: | I think it is a good application of shallow DoF. Razorsharp where it should be.
As you say yourself; I'd lose the black on top. |
Thank you, I'll try to get rid of the black on top
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rinder99
Joined: 12 Jul 2005
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Location: Books and Class Info, www.rindersmithphotography.com or, www.rinderart.com
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:53 am
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Did you do a search for Crab?
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shotum
Joined: 04 Nov 2008
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 11:16 am
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| rinder99 wrote: | | Did you do a search for Crab? |
you mean it is not a crab but a "hermit".. ?
English is not my native .. sorry :) but should have looked before posting.. true..
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mikenorton
Joined: 22 Aug 2005
Posts: 430
Location: Landscape Photography Guide Book www.mikenortonphotography.com/book.html
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 6:21 pm
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I agree, loose the black at the top.
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