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pharm

Joined: 09 Jul 2006
Posts: 9423
Location: Never quite sure
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Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:48 pm
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This is one of my best and I think it's really cool so I hope you guys think it's really cool too and i'd like for you to critique it for me if you don't mind and tell me if you think it would sell. I think it could be used by a lot of people for posters or diaper ads or something. Should I submit it? I think that technically it's about perfect and i've amazed myself at the stunning composition.
(Sorry, folks. The Critique forum seemed a bit barren tonight so I thought I'd give you something to play with). :)
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aynia

Joined: 18 Feb 2009
Posts: 2446
Location: The Land of the Vikings
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:16 am
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It's great to do something different and not to copy what's been done to death.
The second one is pretty amazing! :-)
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fraiseap

Joined: 10 Oct 2008
Posts: 1530
Location: Birmingham UK and www.adamfraise.com
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 1:48 am
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I think there may be just the faintest touch of noise in the crop. Otherwise a great shot - hope it gets accepted.
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jps

Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 12094
Location: Denmark
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 3:56 am
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I love HDR.
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supertramp

Joined: 29 May 2005
Posts: 4518
Location: I don't know, I'm guessing. :)
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 4:46 am
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Your finest work to date.
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fraiseap

Joined: 10 Oct 2008
Posts: 1530
Location: Birmingham UK and www.adamfraise.com
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 5:28 am
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| supertramp wrote: | | Your finest work to date. |
I disagree, the pink cat was better
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digigandalf

Joined: 11 Jun 2005
Posts: 5455
Location: Twinsburg, OH
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 5:57 am
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Perry, the colors are to die for (or is it "from"?). A definite keeper. Definitely too good for SS, though, whose reviewers, I fear, may not have the finely honed tastes to appreciate great works of art
The perspective on the full-sized image is,... ah, certainly unique.
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hgwood

Joined: 26 May 2009
Posts: 135
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 6:03 am
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Trademark infringement on that date stamp; prior art by Gregory XIII
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fraiseap

Joined: 10 Oct 2008
Posts: 1530
Location: Birmingham UK and www.adamfraise.com
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 6:23 am
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| digigandalf wrote: | | Perry, the colors are to die for (or is it "from"?). |
Yeah, how did you do that. Was it
Image>adjustments>select cr*p>worsen
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espencer

Joined: 03 Aug 2008
Posts: 3271
Location: She could be anywhere and might be?
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 6:31 am
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Composition is fantastic...
Everyone should take notes!!!
Betty :0)
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themightyshrub

Joined: 21 Jan 2009
Posts: 943
Location: www.heathergreig.co.uk
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 6:47 am
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I think your crop is upside down
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hhltdave5

Joined: 20 Jun 2006
Posts: 24312
Location: Our Stock, Food & Portrait photography books at www.rindersmithphotography.com
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:15 am
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You know Perry, there just may be hope for you yet! I think shooting things while off your medication seems to have helped you!
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kellyplz

Joined: 09 Mar 2009
Posts: 17624
Location: Manitoulin Island, Canada.
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:16 am
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LOL!
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espencer

Joined: 03 Aug 2008
Posts: 3271
Location: She could be anywhere and might be?
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 7:16 am
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| hhltdave5 wrote: | | You know Perry, there just may be hope for you yet! I think shooting things while off your medication seems to have helped you! |
So that is the reason...
LOL Dave...
Betty :0)
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evaners

Joined: 04 Mar 2008
Posts: 6649
Location: Slightly northeast from the best ice cream stand in the world
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 8:46 am
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Bah! You guys go to easy on Perry just for being an old-timer here. Be honest, I see at least two issues that you would have killed a newbie for:
A. Just below (above?) the time stamp is an orangey speck and a small black thing that runs out of the edge. Ya gotta clean up that kind of stuff in PhotoShop before you post in here.
B. Do I actually have to point this out? I read each post figuring one of you guys would see it and comment. But leave it to the illustrator to notice the crappy antenna sticking out of the roof. C'mon, this is PhotoShop 101 here.
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