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focuspocus
Joined: 22 Mar 2005
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Location: Moscow
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Posted: Tue Mar 22, 2005 5:45 pm
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Critique me ,please.
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fncdigital
Joined: 05 Nov 2004
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Location: If there are any questions, direct them to that brick wall over there.
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Posted: Tue Mar 22, 2005 6:07 pm
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not bad, i think the shot would benifet from being horizontal so you could get mor flow of the fence and roadway...
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focuspocus
Joined: 22 Mar 2005
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Location: Moscow
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Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2005 1:49 am
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Thank you for comments.Can I try again?
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cristina
Joined: 17 Nov 2004
Posts: 214
Location: Italy
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Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2005 2:53 am
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I would suggest you to use the rule of third to enhance your architectural pictures. About the teddy bear, I think you didn't focus right, and didn't change the white balance.
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Le
Joined: 23 Mar 2005
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Posted: Wed Mar 23, 2005 5:39 am
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Try to keep the background simple, this may cure the problem:)
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