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ryanclim
Joined: 22 Feb 2012
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Location: Petaling Jaya, Malaysia
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 4:28 am
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Hi! This is my very first post.
May I ask for your comment/critiques on the photos please? Trying to decide which one is good for submission for approval.
thank you.
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kenny123
Joined: 13 Aug 2005
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Location: Masterton,Wairarapa, New Zealand
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 4:48 am
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Lighthouse: I cropped for better composition,and boosted color
Carousel: You had converging verticals-(don't go wider than 24mm for this kind of shot)-I straightened and boosted color and contrast
Don't forget you need a signed model release for everone in the photo!
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tverkhovynets
Joined: 12 Jun 2010
Posts: 749
Location: Kiev, Ukraine
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 5:28 am
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The Lighthouse will get rejected for composition: the trees in front of it kill the image.
Taras
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ruxpriencdiam
Joined: 07 May 2009
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Location: Third Stone from the Sun
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 6:39 am
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Agree with everyone above.
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ryanclim
Joined: 22 Feb 2012
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Location: Petaling Jaya, Malaysia
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 10:36 am
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Thank you for the comments and advices. Really appreciate it. It helps me to see the shortcoming in the photos and the techniques applied.
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mikenorton
Joined: 22 Aug 2005
Posts: 3474
Location: Guide Book http://www.lulu.com/shop/mike-norton/nortons-notes/paperback/product-5079819.html
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Posted: Fri Feb 24, 2012 12:34 am
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Shooting the branches in the foreground sky is OK if there are no clouds. You had great clouds and you put them behind the branches.
I like the carousel shot. I like how the clouds mimic the motion of the carousel and all of that is pointing to the big wheel. I don't like the people or the tree in the top right corner.
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ryanclim
Joined: 22 Feb 2012
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Location: Petaling Jaya, Malaysia
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Posted: Fri Feb 24, 2012 12:38 am
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| mikenorton wrote: | Shooting the branches in the foreground sky is OK if there are no clouds. You had great clouds and you put them behind the branches.
I like the carousel shot. I like how the clouds mimic the motion of the carousel and all of that is pointing to the big wheel. I don't like the people or the tree in the top right corner. |
Thank you for the comments. Truly appreciate it.
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rinder99
Joined: 12 Jul 2005
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Location: Contact www.rinderart.com/Books and Workshops www.rindersmithphotography.com Youtube/rinder
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Posted: Fri Feb 24, 2012 2:12 am
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i would say keep at it. lets see more.
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