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superngx
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:33 pm
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Newbie. Im going to be shooting lots of new stuff, but I already have lots of portraits and already have releases for them, Im wondering if you think any of these would get accepted
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superngx
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:35 pm
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And also these
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jeffbanke

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Location: www.xlr8photo.com, The real California
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:24 am
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Looking good, but 100% crops would help us for focus, etc. 108 could use some cleaning up to make background all white.
But very nice work so far.
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superngx
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:25 am
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anyone?????
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superngx
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:27 am
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thank you for your reply, here you go
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superngx
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:28 am
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| jeffbanke wrote: | Looking good, but 100% crops would help us for focus, etc. 108 could use some cleaning up to make background all white.
But very nice work so far. |
uploaded!
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markrhiggins
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:30 am
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nice work. As jeff said it is worth making the almost white backgrounds all white (dodge tool on highlights or similar). Also some you reduced there commercial value by tight cropping. Green eye makeup girl could be downsized as it is a bit soft.
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jeffbanke

Joined: 18 Dec 2005
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Location: www.xlr8photo.com, The real California
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:55 am
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Yes, 108 and the green eyed girl are soft, eyes need to be absolutely sharp.
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hhltdave5

Joined: 20 Jun 2006
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Location: Our Stock, Food & Portrait photography books at www.rindersmithphotography.com
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 7:38 am
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I agree. Good work but the focus needs to be razor sharp in the eye for the shots. Not all are soft but just something to watch before submitting. The reviewers look at images at 100% to check for focus. If you get those good and sharp I see no problems with you getting accepted.
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superngx
Joined: 09 Mar 2012
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 10:12 am
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996 and 1513 are soft, right?
And what about the male pictures? what do you think about those?
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markrhiggins
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 3:42 pm
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man running . Make the background white. Black and white torso- generally no black and white first ten. Nice lighting. Cropping limits commercial value.
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rinder99

Joined: 12 Jul 2005
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Location: Contact www.rinderart.com/Books and Workshops www.rindersmithphotography.com Youtube/rinder
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 6:49 pm
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there are some very Major world class Glamour shooters here but good job. Fix the man running and i think he will outsell the girls.because he's doing something. Lifestyle way outsells glamour nowdays.do a search for beauty and glamour."super" glamour is pretty specific to magazine output and gets dated quickly . Normal folks in situations sell very well all the time.Remember cost effectiveness in penny stock is your friend.Nice work.One of my cracked face old ladies sells a 1000 to one over my 1500 glamour girls.But so does my woman blowing her nose or brushing her teeth. LOL
You will have no trouble getting accepted, Just remember to get "stocky" best of luck.also, really look at your isolations carefully. there are some missed places.best in camera.
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triceratops

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Location: The other Nevada
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 7:56 pm
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Beautiful work. Here's what we mean by cleaning up the background. Note that everything that is supposed to be background should be displayed as white. That which is not should be cleaned up. You don't necessarily have to have a white BG. But if you go for a single color isolation whatever color you select should be even across the entire image. It looks like you were going for a neutral gray BG on the runner, but here's what you ended up with. As Laurin said, this is a good shot and should be a great seller. Just smooth out the background.
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superngx
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 10:05 pm
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| triceratops wrote: | | Beautiful work. Here's what we mean by cleaning up the background. Note that everything that is supposed to be background should be displayed as white. That which is not should be cleaned up. You don't necessarily have to have a white BG. But if you go for a single color isolation whatever color you select should be even across the entire image. It looks like you were going for a neutral gray BG on the runner, but here's what you ended up with. As Laurin said, this is a good shot and should be a great seller. Just smooth out the background. |
WOW!! thank you! will do. my bg's are a mess hahaha.
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chbaum

Joined: 19 Sep 2010
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Location: Karlsruhe, Germany
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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 1:33 am
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Hi there,
could anyone explain to me how you check for uneven backgrounds? How do you achieve the "test images" above?
I only have one single "isolation" shot of a cat in my port. When I submitted it, I didn't care a bit about BG issues and still don't know if it's clean at all or how to check for it.
Thanks for the advice,
Christian
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