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abron
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 11:30 am
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critique please
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semmickphoto
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 11:33 am
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Can you post a 100% crop
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ruxpriencdiam
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 12:18 pm
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Lighting and OOF.
100% crops please.
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abron
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 12:22 pm
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| semmickphoto wrote: | | Can you post a 100% crop |
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semmickphoto
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 12:25 pm
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I think it looks sharp in some areas but your DOF is too shallow.
I'll leave this one for the experts to critique.
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ruxpriencdiam
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 12:26 pm
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Yep OOF and no flowers for a first ten.
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rinder99
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 12:56 pm
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You missed focus completely by not understanding DOF. The stamen of a Plant is like the eye of a portrait. It must be TACK sharp.All of it. heres how sharp it has to be. This is 100% crop. And barrys right. no flowers for first 10 unless they are spectacular in focus and Lighting.......And Uniqueness.
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abron
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 2:26 pm
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| rinder99 wrote: | | You missed focus completely by not understanding DOF. The stamen of a Plant is like the eye of a portrait. It must be TACK sharp.All of it. heres how sharp it has to be. This is 100% crop. And barrys right. no flowers for first 10 unless they are spectacular in focus and Lighting.......And Uniqueness. |
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pharm
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 5:37 pm
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???
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ruxpriencdiam
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 5:56 pm
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???
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jeffbanke
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 7:45 pm
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Beside having too shallow a DOF, and the stamen being the most important part, the image is underexposed needs to look more like this with a less cluttered background
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mauijon
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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2012 7:58 pm
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It looks good on black. My pink one, below, sells regularly. The partial red one, not as much.
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wiml
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2012 5:03 am
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| jeffbanke wrote: | | Beside having too shallow a DOF, and the stamen being the most important part, the image is underexposed needs to look more like this with a less cluttered background |
Fixed! good job Jeff!
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jeffbanke
Joined: 18 Dec 2005
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:25 am
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| wiml wrote: | | jeffbanke wrote: | | Beside having too shallow a DOF, and the stamen being the most important part, the image is underexposed needs to look more like this with a less cluttered background |
Fixed! good job Jeff! |
Glad you liked it ;-)
Flowers always seem more dramtic this way
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wiml
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:34 am
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Now you're just showing off, thehe, nice work ;)
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