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jutia
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Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 5:46 pm
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Please criticize those images
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matthi
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Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 6:03 pm
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out of focus, noise, WB (greenish), composition and LCV
what was the idea for this photo ?
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jutia
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Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 6:03 pm
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| jutia wrote: | | Please criticize this images |
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matthi
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Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 6:08 pm
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composition/framing, LCV, OOF and over filtered (noise reduction)
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jutia
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Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 6:15 pm
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| matthi wrote: | | composition/framing, LCV, OOF and over filtered (noise reduction) |
thanks,
the first picture an appetizer on the beach
what means OOF?
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matthi
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Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 6:26 pm
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out of focus => OOF
for the first one: there is no such thing as a beach in that photo I could recognize and 2nd to me that looks abything but appatizing, well in fact I would never eat that kind of fish, no matter how photographed, 3rdy ou have some unidentifiable colorful objects in that photo, i guess! that these are some tools to eat the fish and last but not least in the top part of that photo you have some dark areas which definately do not belong there
so next time make sure that everything withhin the photo is recognizable, belongs there and supports the message so that any dumb can see at the first glance: wow, some appatizer on the beach
imho you have missed this ompletely here
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jutia
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Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 6:57 pm
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| matthi wrote: | out of focus => OOF
for the first one: there is no such thing as a beach in that photo I could recognize and 2nd to me that looks abything but appatizing, well in fact I would never eat that kind of fish, no matter how photographed, 3rdy ou have some unidentifiable colorful objects in that photo, i guess! that these are some tools to eat the fish and last but not least in the top part of that photo you have some dark areas which definately do not belong there
so next time make sure that everything withhin the photo is recognizable, belongs there and supports the message so that any dumb can see at the first glance: wow, some appatizer on the beach
imho you have missed this ompletely here |
OK,thank you very much, great will be of great help for my your comments, I will work in their criticism.
here another image to be criticized
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jutia
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Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 7:32 pm
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excuse, I can follow up pictures in this topic
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rinder99
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Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 7:54 pm
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It's OOF my friend. Get that down First. Then we can move on.
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jutia
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Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:41 pm
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| rinder99 wrote: | | It's OOF my friend. Get that down First. Then we can move on. |
Thanks you,very much
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