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mdegt
Joined: 08 May 2011
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 10:53 pm
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Greetings everyone,
Here's part of my first ten, please provide your honest feedback.
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ruxpriencdiam
Joined: 07 May 2009
Posts: 26192
Location: Third Stone from the Sun
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 11:18 pm
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OOF and may have some copyrights with shoes, bike or helmet?
Also why have her looking backwards at the camera? You need to shoot it from the front as she comes towards you.
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kellythorson
Joined: 22 Sep 2011
Posts: 694
Location: Canada
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 1:02 am
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I actually like her looking back, it's as if she is seeking approval or else showing pride. Unfortunately it is soft or out of focus.
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hhltdave5
Joined: 20 Jun 2006
Posts: 24063
Location: Our Stock, Food & Portrait photography books at www.rindersmithphotography.com
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 4:38 am
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A touch under exposed as well. You want to make sure that you get the face properly lit. Between the helmet and her coat the face is hidden a bit. A fill flash would help out here.
I kind of like the looking back aspect of it but would also shoot one with her looking forward as well.
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