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mdegt
Joined: 08 May 2011
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 10:47 pm
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Greetings everyone,
Here's part of my first ten, please provide your honest feedback.
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ruxpriencdiam
Joined: 07 May 2009
Posts: 26813
Location: Third Stone from the Sun
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 11:08 pm
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The girl is soft (OOF).
The other could work but the crop is missing.
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jhuls
Joined: 02 Jan 2012
Posts: 1056
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 8:56 am
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The focus is just a bit soft once again not too far off, kind of borderline as far as getting accepted. But once again your lighting is too dark. Seems to be a theme in your images. I am wondering if you need to calibrate your monitor.
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rojo
Joined: 26 Feb 2008
Posts: 200
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 10:24 am
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I also think your white balance is off on the little girl...too much blue, leaving the image flat with no pop.
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pharm
Joined: 09 Jul 2006
Posts: 9422
Location: Never quite sure
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 12:00 pm
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The eye on the little girl makes me think you used noise reduction or smart blur on the image which would make it softer. Just a guess here, but since you shot this at ISO 640, there was probably a bit of noise.
I also agree about the WB. It's close but just a tad too blue.
You can post the crop for the second image by replying to your own post and adding it there.
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mdegt
Joined: 08 May 2011
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 8:33 pm
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Hi guys, thank you all for the critique, and my apologies for the posting 10 pictures in 8 threads - won't happen again.
Here's two 100% crops of garden tools and roses picture.
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