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Please critique my candidates for the first ten (batch 5)

 
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mdegt


Joined: 08 May 2011
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Post Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 10:50 pm     Reply with quote

Greetings everyone,

Here's part of my first ten, please provide your honest feedback.



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ruxpriencdiam


Joined: 07 May 2009
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Post Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 11:13 pm     Reply with quote

Shes a bit soft and the boots may get hit with copyright.
jhuls


Joined: 02 Jan 2012
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Post Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 8:52 am     Reply with quote

The focus is almost there, but the lighting is a bit dark. Try lightening this one up a bit, it might introduce noise though so you have to be careful with that.
pharm


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Post Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 12:12 pm     Reply with quote

Jenn! Fabulous concept and fabulous shot! This is the kind of image I like to see. It INSTANTLY tells a story! Great work!

jhuls


Joined: 02 Jan 2012
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Post Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 1:15 pm     Reply with quote

Thanks! I had to move beds and rearrange a bunch of furniture to get that shot. So far it has been a good seller so I guess it was worth it :)
 
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