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mdegt
Joined: 08 May 2011
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 5:20 pm
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Greetings everyone,
I'd like to ask you to provide your honest feedback once again.
All pictures except the church interior are very recent, the church interior is 6 years old, just wandering if it worth something.
Thank you for the critique.
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| Buildings under construction in Toronto lake shore park area |
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| crop of 1st picture - duck from lower right corner |
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| crop of 1st picture - crane on upper right corner |
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mdegt
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 5:22 pm
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next image: parking sign in downtown Toronto. I under if someone might need this one ?
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| Parking sign in Toronto financial district |
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| Parking sign, 100% magnification |
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mdegt
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 5:25 pm
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Next image: boy with binoculars. I had to use light disk to compensate shadows on a chin and cheek, but apparently there are more shadows on the torso that I could not eliminate, so please comment this one regarding lighting and shadows, too
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| Boy with binoculars, 100% magnification |
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mdegt
Joined: 08 May 2011
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 5:35 pm
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Wonted to post one more picture of interior of Basilica of Montreal, but upload has stopped working for some reason and I cannot upload it. So I'll try again in an hour or to, hope it will be fixed soon.
Thanks for critiquing my pictures !
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mdegt
Joined: 08 May 2011
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 7:12 pm
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Here's last image: an interior of Notre-Dame Basilica of Montreal. I shot this picture in 2006, and still like it for some reason.
Thanks for your critique !
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| 100% magnification in 400 x 400 |
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ruxpriencdiam

Joined: 07 May 2009
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Location: Third Stone from the Sun
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2012 9:35 pm
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Forget the Buildings unless it is a complete skyline it wont be accepted it could also use a better sky. It is also OOF and no OOF Ducks either.
The sign is OOF and looks blown on the left side.
The Boy with binoculars is OOF with poor lighting see inside the sleeve and noise can be seen on the binoculars.
The Cathedral has noise and is soft.
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