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Katerina Pochepova


Joined: 25 Apr 2012
Posts: 14
Location: Macedonia

Post Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 6:39 am     Reply with quote

Hi everyone,

When I saw the shutterstock site, I put together what I thought where my best photos and submitted, and I was not accepted. But I wasn't surprised, because while I was waiting for the answer I stared reading this great forum, and I wished I found it first before I submitted.
I've been reading ever since and this is my first post and my first photo for critique.

The photo is one of the ones that I submitted and it was rejected for poor lighting, but to my fault, I was playing with filters and I shouldn't have. So I'm submitting the original for critique and advice. I would appreciated all the help I can get.



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hhltdave5


Joined: 20 Jun 2006
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Location: Our Stock, Food & Portrait photography books at www.rindersmithphotography.com

Post Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 6:54 am     Reply with quote

A bit under exposed and framed a bit too tight. I am not sure if there was anything around the Ferris Wheel that prevented pulling back a bit but to me it is a bit too cramped.

When you are dealing with a scene that has a large bright area such as sky, snow, sand etc you need to be very careful with your metering. The bright area can trick the meter into thinking it is brighter than it is then you end up with an under exposed shot. Spot metering on a more mid tone section will give you a good starting point.

Focus looks to be fine.
Katerina Pochepova


Joined: 25 Apr 2012
Posts: 14
Location: Macedonia

Post Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 7:29 am     Reply with quote

I see you point, maybe I should have another look at the other photos from the same subject.
tverkhovynets


Joined: 12 Jun 2010
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Location: Kiev, Ukraine

Post Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 8:09 am     Reply with quote

The problem of this shot is that it was made in wrong time of the day. The problem is not only with the metering, but also with the harsh lighting which comes from the sun.

Also the background is distracting. See these trees on the background? Try to avoid including them in your shot next time.

Shooting this wheel over nice cloudy day will make your even better.

Also it is a little soft to me. As Dave mentioned, focus is fine, but still can be sharper. I had photographs rejected for focus mainly because the reviewer thought that it should have been sharper.
If I were you, I wouldn't risk for first ten. If you have enough megapixels, you can downsize your image a bit. This helps.

Taras
mattgibson


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Post Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 9:54 am     Reply with quote

Not a 100% crop to check focus properly
rinder99


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Post Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 1:25 pm     Reply with quote

tverkhovynets wrote:
The problem of this shot is that it was made in wrong time of the day. The problem is not only with the metering, but also with the harsh lighting which comes from the sun.

Also the background is distracting. See these trees on the background? Try to avoid including them in your shot next time.

Shooting this wheel over nice cloudy day will make your even better.

Also it is a little soft to me. As Dave mentioned, focus is fine, but still can be sharper. I had photographs rejected for focus mainly because the reviewer thought that it should have been sharper.
If I were you, I wouldn't risk for first ten. If you have enough megapixels, you can downsize your image a bit. This helps.

Taras


Thats fine If ya wanna trick a reviewer Perhaps. But what you end up with is a smaller OOF picture.
pharm


Joined: 09 Jul 2006
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Post Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 1:36 pm     Reply with quote

mattgibson wrote:
Not a 100% crop to check focus properly


Correct. Do NOT resize the crop. If you resize it, it's no longer a 100% crop.
Katerina Pochepova


Joined: 25 Apr 2012
Posts: 14
Location: Macedonia

Post Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 3:39 pm     Reply with quote

pharm wrote:
mattgibson wrote:
Not a 100% crop to check focus properly


Correct. Do NOT resize the crop. If you resize it, it's no longer a 100% crop.


So I need to put the 100% crop from the original, even if it's bigger that 500 pixels on the longest side?

If so here are a couple of new 100% crops from the original photo.

Sorry about that, I just made them less than 500 pixels.



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Last edited by Katerina Pochepova on Thu May 03, 2012 4:41 pm; edited 1 time in total
Mike Price


Joined: 06 Jun 2008
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Post Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 3:50 pm     Reply with quote

That's correct. If it is still bigger than 500px crop again, until it is smaller than 500px. Do not resize.

Mike
semmickphoto


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Post Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 4:35 pm     Reply with quote

Longest side needs to be equal or under 500px
pharm


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Location: Never quite sure

Post Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 5:01 pm     Reply with quote

Focus is slightly soft (too soft for SS) but those look like genuine 100% crops. You catch on quickly! That means you'll most likely learn the ins and outs and you'll do well. Keep at it.
mauijon


Joined: 02 Mar 2005
Posts: 4288
Location: Maui, Hawaii

Post Posted: Thu May 03, 2012 8:40 pm     Reply with quote

The crops look like camera blur--the camera was handheld and needs a tripod.
Katerina Pochepova


Joined: 25 Apr 2012
Posts: 14
Location: Macedonia

Post Posted: Fri May 04, 2012 7:05 am     Reply with quote

Thank you guys for the help, it questioned a lot of things about my approach to photography. I'm thinking of re-shooting this particular scene, if it's stock material.

A question: for future posts about critiquing my work, do I post my photographs in this same topic or do I make a new one?
hhltdave5


Joined: 20 Jun 2006
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Location: Our Stock, Food & Portrait photography books at www.rindersmithphotography.com

Post Posted: Fri May 04, 2012 7:19 am     Reply with quote

Katerina Pochepova wrote:
Thank you guys for the help, it questioned a lot of things about my approach to photography. I'm thinking of re-shooting this particular scene, if it's stock material.

A question: for future posts about critiquing my work, do I post my photographs in this same topic or do I make a new one?


If you come back in a couple of days feel free to create a new thread. The only thing that makes it difficult for us is if you start a thread for each image.

If you want you can come back to this one and put your new shots in. Doesn't really make a difference. It's just if too much time passes it may be difficult to find this thread unless you search the forums for it.
 
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