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Joined: 01 May 2012
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Post Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 4:57 am     Reply with quote

So, I've done as much reading as I can, as far as what's expected of the contributors here at Shutterstock...And I must say, I'm rather daunted by the requirements, as I've none of the technical equipment that so many of you seem to use to crank out such quality stock art. Just a traveler with Photoscape and a Rebel XTI, lol.

But I'm hoping to turn my hobby into $$ (sellout!..), so I'm here to hopefully see if it's worth sending the following photos in as my first 10 submission. Please advise and help me get this right off the bat! :c)



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ruxpriencdiam


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Post Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 5:42 am     Reply with quote

Ok we need 100% crops also.

And the chair forget B&W for a first ten and the composition needs to be better.

The Sunset also not for a first ten either and this one you waited to late for it.

And the Butterfly could work with a different composition and not such a shallow DOF and a bit more light.



Joined: 01 May 2012
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Post Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 5:57 am     Reply with quote

Thanks for the thoughts...Alrighty, discarding the B&W, so no crop of that one. Crops of the second two. Too bad about the sunrise...My personal best photo, IMO...Now I'm a bit more afraid lol!


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ruxpriencdiam


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Post Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 6:11 am     Reply with quote

OOF and lighting.
semmickphoto


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Post Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 6:28 am     Reply with quote

I am not in a position to critique your photos, the only thing I want to say is that your butterfly photo tells much more of a story than the sunrise.
robhainer


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Post Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 6:52 am     Reply with quote

I have a similar shot. Your crop isn't shot the right part of the butterfly.




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hhltdave5


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Post Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 7:25 am     Reply with quote

The others have covered most of the shots but I will just address the sunrise a bit more. Generally speaking it is not a good idea to shoot directly into the sun unless you can control the outcome. What you are basically doing is having this big right spot that is going to mess up your meter reading and you usually end up with much of the other parts of the image under exposed and you also have blown out highlights and flare.

The best time to do this is just before the sun comes up or just as the sun reaches the horizon. This way you eliminate the problems caused by the huge bright spot.

One thing we teach in our landscape photography workshops is to look opposite the sun. Often the best lighting is not in the direction of the sun but in the direction where the sun is shinning. Photography is all about light and how it interacts with the objects in the shot. Early or late light falling on objects is often amazing.

Also, if you look at the sky toward the light you will see that the colors are often washed out. But if you look in the other direction you will see that the sky is much darker and more saturated.

So, when you are facing the sun simply turn around and look what is behind you. Look for how the light interacts. As we say, Shoot The Light.
rinder99


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Post Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 10:06 am     Reply with quote

None in all three threads are going to work Im afraid.. You don't need to start 3 threads. answer yourself in One. Theres to many issues with each Image.
mauijon


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Post Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 5:24 pm     Reply with quote

What are the vertical spots on the sunset crop? They are also in the full view. And noise is showing up.

The butterfly shot looks cold to me, add some warmth to the hands and add saturation, if reshooting.



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Post Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 5:37 pm     Reply with quote

Alright; thank you all for your wonderful insight and advice through my (perhaps too many!) threads...As some of you have noticed, none of these shots were specifically taken with stock imagery in mind. I will have to adjust my focus (mentally and mechanically) before I consider submitting in the future.

We can close these threads, if a mod is present. Thanks again.
 
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