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ragarwal
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 10:48 am
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please critique these images for first submission to SS
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ragarwal
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 10:50 am
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ragarwal
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 10:52 am
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ragarwal
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 11:06 am
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clock tower church
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scruggelgreen
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Location: Apple Valley Minnesota
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 2:12 pm
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i think all of them could get dinged for a property release, and the composition just doesn't do it for me on "Clock", way to tight from side to side and tons of left over room on the top and bottom. My eye tries hard to flip this to a horizontal shot.
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rinder99
Joined: 12 Jul 2005
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Location: Contact www.rinderart.com/Books and Workshops www.rindersmithphotography.com Youtube/rinder
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 2:41 pm
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Been here 3 years?
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ragarwal
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 4:53 pm
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| rinder99 wrote: | | Been here 3 years? |
Sorry, I don't understand what you are trying to say.
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ragarwal
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 4:55 pm
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| scruggelgreen wrote: | | i think all of them could get dinged for a property release, and the composition just doesn't do it for me on "Clock", way to tight from side to side and tons of left over room on the top and bottom. My eye tries hard to flip this to a horizontal shot. |
Thanks
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mauijon
Joined: 02 Mar 2005
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Location: Maui, Hawaii
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 5:04 pm
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These are all very noisy and a couple are soft focus. And what would they sell?
The clock tower is underexposed, soft and noisy. You shot this wide open f-5.6. Stop down at least one stop for the sweet spot and the extreme end of the focal range, 18mm, is not the best on the lens.
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rinder99
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Location: Contact www.rinderart.com/Books and Workshops www.rindersmithphotography.com Youtube/rinder
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 5:11 pm
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| ragarwal wrote: | | rinder99 wrote: | | Been here 3 years? |
Sorry, I don't understand what you are trying to say. |
Just curious.. what happened from the time you joined till now? Windows is your best shot but what would a buyer use it for?Whats to concept or story. Not every image needs one but..It sure helps.
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ragarwal
Joined: 19 Jul 2009
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 5:28 pm
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| mauijon wrote: | These are all very noisy and a couple are soft focus. And what would they sell?
The clock tower is underexposed, soft and noisy. You shot this wide open f-5.6. Stop down at least one stop for the sweet spot and the extreme end of the focal range, 18mm, is not the best on the lens. |
Got it, thanks for the suggestions!
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ragarwal
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2012 6:13 pm
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| mauijon wrote: | These are all very noisy and a couple are soft focus. And what would they sell?
The clock tower is underexposed, soft and noisy. You shot this wide open f-5.6. Stop down at least one stop for the sweet spot and the extreme end of the focal range, 18mm, is not the best on the lens. |
Got it, thanks for the suggestions!
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