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dick707

Joined: 12 Jan 2007
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Location: Portsmouth, RI
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 10:55 am
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ruxpriencdiam

Joined: 07 May 2009
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Location: Third Stone from the Sun
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 11:03 am
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OOF, composition and lighting, now where is the 100% crop at.
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dick707

Joined: 12 Jan 2007
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 11:05 am
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rinder99

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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 1:00 pm
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Heres 2 crops of flowers. they have to be this sharp. You can do this. It's about lots of practice and technique.See a difference??
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dick707

Joined: 12 Jan 2007
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Location: Portsmouth, RI
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 1:01 pm
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thanks for the input
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banepetkovic
Joined: 03 Mar 2012
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2012 3:15 am
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Very good photo. What a pitty it's not much sharper. Just better sharpness/focus and a little bit different framing and it'll be excellent.
As an example of framing distance between the flower and the left edge (up and down also - don't frame up and down so tight) should be 1/3 of distance between the flower and the right edge. Or just crop square (but not too tight) because negative space also have fine symetrical (radial) geometry and it is nice extension of the subject's geometry.
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royster

Joined: 19 Apr 2009
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Location: England/Greece
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2012 10:11 am
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The general advice is no flowers for your first 10 unless they are outstanding
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