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Ron Gage
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 5:18 pm
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Greetings from Detroit:
While I am awaiting my acceptance from the review process, I thought I would see what you kind folk think of some of my work. Thus...
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Ron Gage
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 5:37 pm
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Before someone asks, here is the 100% crop of that image...
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ruxpriencdiam
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 5:41 pm
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Slightly OOF with lighting, exposure, composition and copyright (state street) possible.
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triceratops
Joined: 15 Nov 2006
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Location: The other Nevada
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 5:41 pm
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What's the size of your original image (height and width) in pixels? If that's truly a 100% crop, then it looks as if the original may be too small.
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scruggelgreen
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Location: Apple Valley Minnesota
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 5:43 pm
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White balance is off (Goldish color cast to the image), composition (You have the horizon right in the mddle of the image, and Out of Focus. Looks like you shot this at F22, your going to see defraction at that point. I would go F11 - F16 for this shot. Also change your ISO to 100, that will help
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Ron Gage
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 5:46 pm
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| triceratops wrote: | | What's the size of your original image (height and width) in pixels? If that's truly a 100% crop, then it looks as if the original may be too small. |
The original is 4272 x 2848. I guess I am still trying to figure out how to do a 100% crop in Lightroom.
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ruxpriencdiam
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triceratops
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 5:53 pm
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Here's what a 500 by 500 pixel crop of your original image would show. Not this size of course, but what it should show. Just the three red lights.
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ruxpriencdiam
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 5:57 pm
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| triceratops wrote: | | Here's what a 500 by 500 pixel crop of your original image would show. Not this size of course, but what it should show. Just the three red lights. |
And i have a feeling at that size it will be way OOF with some serious noise.
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Ron Gage
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 5:59 pm
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| triceratops wrote: | | Here's what a 500 by 500 pixel crop of your original image would show. Not this size of course, but what it should show. Just the three red lights. |
Let's see if this is any better then...
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ruxpriencdiam
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 6:04 pm
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Looks like some serious banding of some type because that looks like what you see when you take a picture of a computer screen.
OOF and a lot more BTW.
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Ron Gage
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 6:12 pm
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| ruxpriencdiam wrote: | Looks like some serious banding of some type because that looks like what you see when you take a picture of a computer screen.
OOF and a lot more BTW. |
Fair enough - thanks for looking!
Ron
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digigandalf
Joined: 11 Jun 2005
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Location: Twinsburg, OH
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 7:32 pm
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Just a comment on some of the comments above. The gold hue is obviously deliberate, so I don't think that would be a problem. And street names are not copyrighted. (Heaven help us if they go that far!)
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ruxpriencdiam
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 9:19 pm
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| digigandalf wrote: | | Just a comment on some of the comments above. The gold hue is obviously deliberate, so I don't think that would be a problem. And street names are not copyrighted. (Heaven help us if they go that far!) |
Notice i said possible.
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rinder99
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 9:21 pm
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None of these stand a chance Ron.
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