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akhayat
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2012 12:22 pm
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Hi,
your critique plz .. wanna check how it would pass the sample test.
thanks in advance .
regards
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ruxpriencdiam
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2012 12:34 pm
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OOF and i can see that without the crop but the 100% crop would be nice.
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akhayat
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2012 12:36 pm
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| ruxpriencdiam wrote: | | OOF and i can see that without the crop but the 100% crop would be nice. |
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ruxpriencdiam
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2012 12:41 pm
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When it comes to animals and people it is all about the eye's and there are none visible on your cat.
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akhayat
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2012 12:44 pm
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| ruxpriencdiam wrote: | When it comes to animals and people it is all about the eye's and there are none visible on your cat.
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i agree with you on the eyes thing , the idea of my photo , is that the cat is hiding her face from the day light ... i got your point .. thanks
but is it OOF totally , or up to an accepted level ?
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jhuls
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2012 12:49 pm
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I like the pose I disagree about having to see the eyes. Clearly this cat is sleeping and I find the pose interesting. But this photo has other problems, the crop is wrong and too tight, I'm sure you were just trying to crop out distractions but it doesn't work. Also the 100% crop should be on the face, The crop you did show us is OOF and needs to be sharper to be accepted.
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ruxpriencdiam
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2012 12:52 pm
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And there is the lighting issue with vignetting in the corners.
Here is a sleeping kitten.
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akhayat
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Posted: Thu May 10, 2012 1:05 pm
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| jhuls wrote: | | I like the pose I disagree about having to see the eyes. Clearly this cat is sleeping and I find the pose interesting. But this photo has other problems, the crop is wrong and too tight, I'm sure you were just trying to crop out distractions but it doesn't work. Also the 100% crop should be on the face, The crop you did show us is OOF and needs to be sharper to be accepted. |
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