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christian900


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Post Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 9:22 pm     Reply with quote

The one picture that I took that was acceptable was a coffee cup made out of coffee beans and this time I did the same sort of thing out of seashells. This time I tried letters. Would this picture be accepted?


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ruxpriencdiam


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Post Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 9:37 pm     Reply with quote

Uneven lighting, top left corner bright, bottom right corner is darker.
kayseepics


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Post Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 10:17 pm     Reply with quote

Nice idea. I think the lighting is uneven and the shells need to pop out of the background more. They blend into the background as is stands now. Also the focus seems quite soft.
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Post Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 10:42 pm     Reply with quote

ruxpriencdiam wrote:
Uneven lighting, top left corner bright, bottom right corner is darker.


+1

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I dont think its soft. It seems to be in focus.

Maybe framed a bit tight.
christian900


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Post Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 9:56 am     Reply with quote

I can try to fix those, but I was also concerned about its commercial value and the fact that the lines aren't very straight. Should I try to make stock like this in the future?
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Post Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 11:32 am     Reply with quote

Upload it and see if it gets accepted. Every time you upload something you will learn a little about what will be accepted and what will not. After you have uploaded enough and viewed the results, you will know what will be acceptable and what will not. The only way to know for sure is to give it a try.
digigandalf


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Post Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 11:52 am     Reply with quote

mikenorton wrote:
Upload it and see if it gets accepted. Every time you upload something you will learn a little about what will be accepted and what will not. After you have uploaded enough and viewed the results, you will know what will be acceptable and what will not. The only way to know for sure is to give it a try.


Mike, this is for the OP's first 10, so that puts a bit different spin on it.

I'd even out the lighting if you can and then hold it for after you make it in. Then, if it gets approved and sells, do variations (just not too similar).
Mike Price


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Post Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:29 pm     Reply with quote

I like the idea, but I would pull back a bit to leave a little more room around the letters, they are very close to the edges of the image.

Mike
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Post Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:32 pm     Reply with quote

Mike Price wrote:
I like the idea, but I would pull back a bit to leave a little more room around the letters, they are very close to the edges of the image.

Mike


agree.



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Post Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:34 pm     Reply with quote

Nice one
christian900


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Post Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 1:16 pm     Reply with quote

Thank you everybody. I'll save that picture for later. How about this one?


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rinder99


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Post Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 1:56 pm     Reply with quote

How about a spoon and napkin? Ya need to style more my friend.And what is it sitting On, A carpet?
ruxpriencdiam


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Post Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 2:17 pm     Reply with quote

Thems some small clams compared to the crackers and bowl and whats that behind them nuts? Potatoes? And there is something about blue and food.



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Post Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 2:25 pm     Reply with quote

the back ground grabs more attention then the product i feel. If not as a photographer, but as a web designer, i would prefer a light background and a more colorful or attractive bowl. :-) Some dressing at the top of the bowl contents would also a good idea.
christian900


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Post Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2012 12:54 pm     Reply with quote

Thank you. (And I tried putting a small bowl upside down, but it kept floating to the top, so I had to use beans instead. The blue background is fabric I bought at the store to match the bowl, but I didn't know that blue and food didn't mix well)

How about this one?



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