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Posted: Tue May 29, 2012 5:04 am
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Critique please
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rinder99
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2012 9:09 am
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You did it again. You boxed her in with no where to go or look. and ya really need a hair light behind her, Otherwise shes a floating head on black.now she can be looking at a product or idea. You need to open it up. see how much more pleasing this is? If she was a cracked face 90 Year old woman, then you can come in. Shes not. A portrait MUST breathe.
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rinder99
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2012 9:17 am
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A hair light is very important to give separation regardless of the mood you are trying to do. Shes to young for a pure emotional shot.Otherwise what you end up with is a police Line up/Passport static shot.Hang in there , keep shooting.There are rules in Portraiture, Learn them ....Then break all of them.And you can come back to one light for a reason.Notice how her arm Takes your eye Out of the Picture?Theres a reason.
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rinder99
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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2012 11:58 pm
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Why don't you answer. Thats what this is about, You post, we answer and do some work. You Come back and say thanks and understand. were trying to help. You may not like my response But Im Honest.I don't have time to hold hands here my friend.
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jeffbanke
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Location: www.xlr8photo.com, The real California
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 12:41 am
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| rinder99 wrote: | | Why don't you answer. Thats what this is about, You post, we answer and do some work. You Come back and say thanks and understand. were trying to help. You may not like my response But Im Honest.I don't have time to hold hands here my friend. |
Perhaps he/she has gone on holiday :-)
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rinder99
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 4:05 pm
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I miss becky, she was a fun Gal.
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jeffbanke
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2012 1:21 am
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| rinder99 wrote: | | I miss becky, she was a fun Gal. |
Yes she is!
My last shot of her
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rinder99
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:16 am
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She drove all the way to LA for me to shoot her and her daughter. great series. My Last 3. Her daughter was a natural Ham.
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jeffbanke
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Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:46 am
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Then of course her sidekick Sophie, we had a great time when they came up to Nor Cal so they could learn a little about landscape photography.
My fave shot I have of her is this tight shot of her eyes
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