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mukashi
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:38 pm
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I'm still working on my first ten submissions, but I'd like to ask for some feedback to make sure I'm on the right track. Any critique or advice is much appreciated!
I'm attaching 8 files for now -- hoping to finish the others over the weekend.
thanks for your time :)
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mukashi
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:40 pm
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(next 3) |
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mukashi
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:43 pm
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(last 3)
Regarding the dancers, I'm not sure what the best way to arrange them would be.
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mjak
Joined: 12 Mar 2010
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Location: Potatoland
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Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2012 7:49 pm
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Ohh...I'm afraid you can get "too simple". |
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mukashi
Joined: 04 Jun 2012
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 1:29 am
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For which ones? |
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theohrm
Joined: 16 Aug 2009
Posts: 457
Location: Ireland
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 4:22 am
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A definite too simple on the first three. A possible too simple on all the others apart from the dancers. You should be safe with it, but if you can put a couple more on that file, you'll be safer (if these were uploaded as a single batch I might be tempted to "too simple" that one.) |
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toots7777
Joined: 06 Apr 2009
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Location: Tenerife, Canary Islands
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 6:28 am
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I have to agree with mjak and theohrm, you will probably get a 'too simple' rejection.
If these designs are the best that you are submitting then I suggest you find a local college and take a course in order to get your skill level turned up a notch or two.
I'm not suggesting the above in a nasty way, I myself took a course in order to get more comfortable and experience with the software I was using (illustrator) and from there I built up my skill level.
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mirage3
Joined: 23 Apr 2008
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Location: Does it matter?
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 6:50 am
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I agree with what has been said... I think the lanterns do stand a chance but they would look better with shadows, and gradients... the dancers?...not sure... I would suggest you follow Toots excellent advice... |
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baz777
Joined: 03 Dec 2008
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 6:55 am
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The dancers I like, great concept. This is the only one I would say put forward for your first 10. Look at our ports to get an idea of what is being accepted. |
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mukashi
Joined: 04 Jun 2012
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2012 1:30 pm
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All right, thanks! |
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evaners
Joined: 04 Mar 2008
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Location: NO! We aren't there yet!
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Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2012 7:58 pm
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| baz777 wrote: | | The dancers I like, great concept. This is the only one I would say put forward for your first 10. Look at our ports to get an idea of what is being accepted. |
Yes, especially look at Barry's port, particularly the image below. Yeeeeessss, look into the wheeeeeel... stare into the wheeeeel and feeeeel reeeelaxed, you are getting sleeeeeepy....
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thomasamby
Joined: 12 Nov 2008
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Location: Copenhagen, Denmark
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 6:44 am
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| evaners wrote: | | baz777 wrote: | | The dancers I like, great concept. This is the only one I would say put forward for your first 10. Look at our ports to get an idea of what is being accepted. |
Yes, especially look at Barry's port, particularly the image below. Yeeeeessss, look into the wheeeeeel... stare into the wheeeeel and feeeeel reeeelaxed, you are getting sleeeeeepy....
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HAHA that is SO cool |
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baz777
Joined: 03 Dec 2008
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 8:19 am
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That one makes me feel sick!!!! |
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