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L S Brierley
Joined: 14 Jun 2012
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 2:05 pm
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Hi all
Please could I have some feedback and help with this? I'm thinking I would need to clone out the brand name and the background isn't white, but am I on the right lines with regards to technique? It's my first go so please be gentle :)
many thanks in advance
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ruxpriencdiam

Joined: 07 May 2009
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Location: Third Stone from the Sun
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 2:23 pm
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Forget this for a first ten and move on.
Cameras are being removed and rejected for copyright.
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L S Brierley
Joined: 14 Jun 2012
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 2:30 pm
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Ah ok - no problem, thanks for your help! How about for technique though, is it anywhere near?
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rinder99

Joined: 12 Jul 2005
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Location: Contact www.rinderart.com/Books and Workshops www.rindersmithphotography.com Youtube/rinder
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 2:31 pm
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Thats true.it's very recognizable. gentle? I don't know. Honest, Yes.
But if your submitting something Like this it has to be done technically perfect. Your table is very dirty, Background needs to be pure white and yes you must clone out the writing and a better specimen wouldn't hurt. I wouldn't waste much Time on it.
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L S Brierley
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 2:49 pm
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Thanks for your advice. You're right it is; its a black glass table and is showing marks up. OK maybe back to the drawing board I think!..
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