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L S Brierley


Joined: 14 Jun 2012
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Post Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 2:05 pm     Reply with quote

Hi all

Please could I have some feedback and help with this? I'm thinking I would need to clone out the brand name and the background isn't white, but am I on the right lines with regards to technique? It's my first go so please be gentle :)

many thanks in advance



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ruxpriencdiam


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Post Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 2:23 pm     Reply with quote

Forget this for a first ten and move on.

Cameras are being removed and rejected for copyright.
L S Brierley


Joined: 14 Jun 2012
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Post Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 2:30 pm     Reply with quote

Ah ok - no problem, thanks for your help! How about for technique though, is it anywhere near?
rinder99


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Post Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 2:31 pm     Reply with quote

Thats true.it's very recognizable. gentle? I don't know. Honest, Yes.

But if your submitting something Like this it has to be done technically perfect. Your table is very dirty, Background needs to be pure white and yes you must clone out the writing and a better specimen wouldn't hurt. I wouldn't waste much Time on it.



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L S Brierley


Joined: 14 Jun 2012
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Post Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 2:49 pm     Reply with quote

Thanks for your advice. You're right it is; its a black glass table and is showing marks up. OK maybe back to the drawing board I think!..
 
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