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Sanbao Zheng
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Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2012 9:48 pm
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I tried to post this but didn't see it show up in the forum. Sorry if I have double posted it.
Anyway I am just trying to get some critiques to prepare my first 10 submission. I know I have a long way to go but this is a start. Thanks in advance.
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Sanbao Zheng
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Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2012 9:50 pm
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Here are some more. I couldn't upload more than 3 photos in one post.
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Sanbao Zheng
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Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2012 9:52 pm
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ruxpriencdiam
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Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2012 10:03 pm
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OOF.
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Sanbao Zheng
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Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2012 10:07 pm
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All of them? btw I tried several times to upload the third 100% crop but couldn't get it through. trying one more time... looked like it still not making it...
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jeffbanke
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 12:31 am
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I agree with Barry on the first two being OOF, however the last one which has a shallow DOF, (the fan with the chincses writing) I cannot make a determination without the 100% of the area that appears to be the most in focus
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rinder99
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 12:55 am
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Agree with Jeff on the last one. Others are gone for focus.
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tverkhovynets
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 4:02 am
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Also lighting is not correct on some images being too harsh. They like bright images, but with even lighting.
Taras
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hhltdave5
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Location: Our Stock, Food & Portrait photography books at www.rindersmithphotography.com
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 7:21 am
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You can only upload three images at a time. You can add to the thread just by starting another post in it.
Just to add a couple of things to what has already been said.
Watch your composition and your depth of field. In image IMG_7638_small.JPG what grabs my eye first is the out of focus area on the left side. The shallow DOF caused that to be thrown way OOF which tends to draw the eye to that instead of the object of the shot. Take the time to now only know what is in the entire viewfinder other than the object of the shot as well as understand what your aperture will do to the DOF.
As far as the lighting goes with the fan shot you have some obvious light fall off. Notice the difference in intensity from the front of the fan to the back of it. The further light has to travel the less intense it becomes so you need to make some kind of adjustment.
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Sanbao Zheng
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 7:56 am
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Thanks for all your comments, very helpful. Working on them. ..
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