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alastair27


Joined: 24 Aug 2010
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Post Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 11:35 am     Reply with quote

trying to create a painterly effect with Photoshop HDR with this old door from a disused mill


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jeffbanke


Joined: 18 Dec 2005
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Post Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 11:52 am     Reply with quote

Wow Alstair, that just about pop off of my screen :-)

A tad overprocessed,OK more than a tad LOL!
rinder99


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Post Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 12:22 pm     Reply with quote

WHOA!!!!! Man you almost killed me. this is way over the top. Let this kinda stuff go my friend.
alastair27


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Post Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 12:57 pm     Reply with quote

kinda German Expressionist School of Art, not known for their subtle use of colour --- but the colours are there as can be seen in this slightly more subtle version


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jeffbanke


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Post Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 1:06 pm     Reply with quote

Alastair ask yourself what concept does this convey? Can you think of three things that it would support?

Remember, our images must support convey a concept, illustrate a process or service, support a product or be an exeplory example of the subject such that it can be used in a reference book or web site illustrating the subject.
royster


Joined: 19 Apr 2009
Posts: 299
Location: England/Greece

Post Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 1:41 pm     Reply with quote

I would like to see the original image
alastair27


Joined: 24 Aug 2010
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Post Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 4:43 pm     Reply with quote

Below is the original version which is OOF so the reason for the experimentation. The second posted photo is an original with a little processing.

As for concept; colour, texture, decay, aging, history of the textile industry and its decline.

The mill is Dean Clough in Halifax which was once the largest carpet factory in England, which closed and has had to reinvent itself as a business and cultural centre. All these connotations are to be found in such an image which could be also found in any image of the American rust-belt



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rinder99


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Post Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 6:49 pm     Reply with quote

"history of the textile industry and its decline."

Nice door But you know what,why and where. a buyer will just see a Old door.I see it like this, not psychedelic.Also think it would be a cool print for your wall.



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alastair27


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Post Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2012 12:22 am     Reply with quote

+1 looks good in black and white, will try it.

The door was a follow-up to the pipes at Dean Clough, which was accepted and surprisingly sold a couple of times, last was in Russia.

Maybe I should submit a b&w version of this one



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rinder99


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Post Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2012 9:41 am     Reply with quote

Rust always works in B&W.So does leather,wood and things with blue and green in them.


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alastair27


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Post Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 11:23 am     Reply with quote

Eventually third time lucky managed to get a photo of the door accepted, along with 3 other (Image ID: 108835736) and three of other rusty pipes. Irony of it was that I took it handheld with my small Canon on autofocus, which rather flies in the face of forum convention. Then four of them sold today in northern Germany.[/img]
jeffbanke


Joined: 18 Dec 2005
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Post Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 12:15 pm     Reply with quote

Well done!
It is not that you cannot get images accepted, using less than pro equipment, just that it is more difficult.
For example, add up the time you had invested in those images, divide it by how much you earned from them and figure out the hourly rate.
Now if the subject had been accepted the first go round, the ROI would be higher. With better equipment it minimizes the amount of work one needs to do to get images accepted.
dustine


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Post Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 10:14 pm     Reply with quote

rinder99 wrote:
Rust always works in B&W.So does leather,wood and things with blue and green in them.


Wow...nice tip! Thanks Rinder.
 
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