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dockman
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Posted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 2:53 pm
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He's a ugly thing but has some amazing colors.
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kenny123
Joined: 13 Aug 2005
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Location: Masterton, New Zealand
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Posted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 3:07 pm
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You need to show the "amazing colors", the eye looks dead without a catchlight,The patch of light on the floor and orange fringe on bottom of bird,needs to go,and the crop is too tight on the full image.Backlighting needs to be better controlled/manipulated.Ken
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| colors boosted,catchlight added |
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stonefury
Joined: 17 Jun 2009
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Location: Japan
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Posted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 9:05 pm
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You're using RGB rather than sRGB which is making the colors look dull when you post here.
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dockman
Joined: 28 Mar 2009
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Posted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 11:37 pm
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I know I should have controlled the light but that appeared to be the turkey's job. He didn't like the poster board we were waving around at him so when I got him stopped in the shade i took my opportunity.
I have done the editing ken said i needed (and why i can't see these things before someone points it out i don't know)and have changed the color to sRGB. Do I need to do more?
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dockman
Joined: 28 Mar 2009
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Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 12:37 am
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or is this one better? I sharpened it a little more and a touch more saturation. can i use it for my 10?
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dockman
Joined: 28 Mar 2009
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Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 7:00 pm
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| stonefury wrote: | | You're using RGB rather than sRGB which is making the colors look dull when you post here. |
Thank you for the info. I wondered why they looked better on my hard drive than on the server and that wont happen again.
Is the turkey good to go?
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kenny123
Joined: 13 Aug 2005
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Location: Masterton, New Zealand
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Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 10:58 pm
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| dockman wrote: | | stonefury wrote: | | You're using RGB rather than sRGB which is making the colors look dull when you post here. |
Thank you for the info. I wondered why they looked better on my hard drive than on the server and that wont happen again.
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No-the turkey's head is dead central in the frame and the background is too cluttered-try filling the frame-suggested crop:
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dockman
Joined: 28 Mar 2009
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Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 11:39 pm
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Thanks, I couldnt crop it as tight as suggested and keep it above 4,000,000. This looks way better though, I appreciate all the help.
Would this be one for my 2nd attempt at 10
Robert
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jeffbanke
Joined: 18 Dec 2005
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Location: www.xlr8photo.com
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Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:16 am
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I would advice against it unless you have a turkey that looks like this
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